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high school English teacher. citizen soldier. brother & son. follower of a Higher Power.
Published by JERROD_84 | Thursday, September 30, 2010 2:13 PM
BR 100 word contest
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Nice job creating tension by using some very strong words. You said so much using only 100 words.
You do a nice job of creating energy, movement and passion in this piece with the fast moving, back and forth dialogue. I like that. I also like the way you turn it at the very last line so that it's like it's still the speaker talking, but they have adopted someone else's words. Pretty cool.
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