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Hawai'i Sonnet 73

Posted by BAMBOO BUCKAROO
Monday, August 12, 2019 4:43 PM


The word for today is

advice

Use it in any kind of writing you choose, then post it and link to me, or just leave it in the comments below. I’d love to read anything you wrote : )

Here's mine for today.

Hawai'i Sonnet 73

Miss her kiss
lose half of you
get fractioned down
one halved from two

Cut to half
of what you were
a stupid error
cost all of her

Some thoughtless words
a bumbling brain
some free advice
slap your head again

It’s always hard to give up the past
If it were easy you’d let go at last

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